Thursday, June 28, 2012

MSFV Baby Slushpile Query Critique

Just want to let folks know that I was fortunate enough to have my query chosen to be up on Miss Snark's First Victim for critique today. I haven't been haven't much luck with my querying so I'm super hopeful that this exercise will help me figure out what's wrong.

I will be eternally grateful to those that give a critique!

It's Baby Slushpile Entry #17 for anyone that's interested.

Thank you!


  1. Good luck and congrats on putting yourself out there!

  2. Good luck and a clear head when fine-tuning. Queries and pitches are brain-twisters!

    1. I couldn't agree more. I thought I had a good query but I've had NO response to it. Obviously it needs some work.

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    1. Thanks Martin. I got a lot of good feedback on my query and since I was luck enough to have it chosen as one of the top 5, Authoress is going to post my first 500 words on Monday!


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