My First Microfiction

Our friend Vero over at Building Character has had a couple recent posts about a very interesting, very challenging medium called "Microfiction".

Basically microfiction is all about writing super short stories. Vero explains it better than I do.

I like the idea of trying to pack all the necessary story elements into a few words. It's one hell of a challenge.

Without further ado, here is my first attempt at microfiction.

                       Hospital hallway prayers unanswered, she lost her mom and her 
                       faith in the same last breath.

Well, what do you think?